Wednesday, April 7, 2010
A New Direction
It's been a while since I last updated. I'm now completely heading in a different direction with my story and I'm happy to say I'm sticking with it.
Here is my brief synopsis - A creature wakes up from a cryogenic sleep scared and startled. He begins to look for the one thing that gives him comfort, his cute stuffed animal. Only after he finds this can he feel okay to return to his slumber.
Here is my brief synopsis - A creature wakes up from a cryogenic sleep scared and startled. He begins to look for the one thing that gives him comfort, his cute stuffed animal. Only after he finds this can he feel okay to return to his slumber.
Sunday, February 21, 2010
Synopsis Take Three
The story begins with a young boy walking down a street, he's carrying a stick and wooden shield and he's swinging at the air. As he walks by a house he hears a loud banging noise, so he goes to investigate.
Parallel to this story is another story. A Soldier walks down an alley and spots a soldier of the opposite force .
Cut back to the young boy as he sees that the sound is coming from another young boy hitting a tree with a stick. The little boy excited to see a boy his age, asks if he wants to duel. They begin to sword fight.
Cut to the soldier. As he is about to turn the corner he is spotted and a hail of gunfire hits the wall near him.
Cut back to the kids fighting.
Cuts back to the soldiers fighting. The main soldier shoots and hits the man from the opposing force knocking him down.
Cuts back to the main boy knocking down his new found friend.
Cuts back to the soldier looking down at the fallen man.
Cuts back to the boy helping his friend up.
Cuts back to the soldier helping the man up.
Parallel to this story is another story. A Soldier walks down an alley and spots a soldier of the opposite force .
Cut back to the young boy as he sees that the sound is coming from another young boy hitting a tree with a stick. The little boy excited to see a boy his age, asks if he wants to duel. They begin to sword fight.
Cut to the soldier. As he is about to turn the corner he is spotted and a hail of gunfire hits the wall near him.
Cut back to the kids fighting.
Cuts back to the soldiers fighting. The main soldier shoots and hits the man from the opposing force knocking him down.
Cuts back to the main boy knocking down his new found friend.
Cuts back to the soldier looking down at the fallen man.
Cuts back to the boy helping his friend up.
Cuts back to the soldier helping the man up.
Tuesday, February 16, 2010
Synopsis Take Two
The story starts with two best friends, Edward and Will playing in a war torn environment. They are dueling with sticks and using trashcan lids and pieces of wood as shields. All is going well until they bump into a tall ominous soldier. The solider is Edwards father and he is very upset to see his son socializing with someone from the other side. Edwards father grabs him by the arm and drags him away.
Cuts to the present where both Edwards and Will are now soldiers. They are patrolling the area and almost shoot each other before recognizing each other.
(I'm still unsure how I should end this story, and I'm sure there will still be many revisions. Any recommendations or comments are greatly appreciated.)
Cuts to the present where both Edwards and Will are now soldiers. They are patrolling the area and almost shoot each other before recognizing each other.
(I'm still unsure how I should end this story, and I'm sure there will still be many revisions. Any recommendations or comments are greatly appreciated.)
Monday, February 15, 2010
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